……可以点击“解释”来了解为什么那是错的。我把这些看作教学契机，通过在需要的时候给你一小段语法知识点，帮助你成为一个更有意识的写作者。顺便推荐一下比尔·斯托特的《直奔主题》（Write to the Point）。我之后会去看看辛瑟的作品。
…can click explain and learn why it is wrong. I see these as teachable moments and by giving you snippets of grammar info when you need it, I am helping to make you a more aware writer. BTW I recommend Write to the Point by Bill Stott. Will checker out Zinsser's work.
这里有一本书（克利福德·斯托尔推荐的），有助于简化写作流程：比尔·斯托特的《直奔主题》（Write to the Point）。我也不是校友，但我很喜欢这个圈子，至少很喜欢看“Ask YC”提问和大家的回复。
Here's a book (recommended by Clifford Stoll) that helps simplify the process of writing: "Write to the Point" by Bill Stott. I'm not an alum either, but enjoy this group, at least the 'ask YC' questions and responses.
……有多少工程师写文章喜欢用“utilize”而不是“use”。你可能会想，“谁在乎呢？”但去读一篇全是生僻词、被动语态等等堆砌的论文吧——读起来太费劲了。我最喜欢的书之一是比尔·斯托特的《直奔主题》（Write to the Point）。他提倡精炼的写作，以便快速传达思想。我读他的书顺畅得就像在读一本尼尔·斯蒂芬森的小说。这就是清晰表达带来的巨大差异的明证。……
…How many engineers write "utilize" over "use". You may think, "who cares?" but read a paper where everything is said with complex words, passive voice, etc.--it gets dense. One of my favorite books is Write to the Point by Bill Stott. He advocates concise writing to communicate ideas quickly. I breezed through his book like it was a Neil Stephenson novel. This is a testimony to the difference clear writing makes.…
……可以点击“解释”来了解为什么那是错的。我把这些看作教学契机，通过在需要的时候给你一小段语法知识点，帮助你成为一个更有意识的写作者。顺便推荐一下比尔·斯托特的《直奔主题》（Write to the Point）。我之后会去看看辛瑟的作品。
…can click explain and learn why it is wrong. I see these as teachable moments and by giving you snippets of grammar info when you need it, I am helping to make you a more aware writer. BTW I recommend Write to the Point by Bill Stott. Will checker out Zinsser's work.
这里有一本书（克利福德·斯托尔推荐的），有助于简化写作流程：比尔·斯托特的《直奔主题》（Write to the Point）。我也不是校友，但我很喜欢这个圈子，至少很喜欢看“Ask YC”提问和大家的回复。
Here's a book (recommended by Clifford Stoll) that helps simplify the process of writing: "Write to the Point" by Bill Stott. I'm not an alum either, but enjoy this group, at least the 'ask YC' questions and responses.
……有多少工程师写文章喜欢用“utilize”而不是“use”。你可能会想，“谁在乎呢？”但去读一篇全是生僻词、被动语态等等堆砌的论文吧——读起来太费劲了。我最喜欢的书之一是比尔·斯托特的《直奔主题》（Write to the Point）。他提倡精炼的写作，以便快速传达思想。我读他的书顺畅得就像在读一本尼尔·斯蒂芬森的小说。这就是清晰表达带来的巨大差异的明证。……
…How many engineers write "utilize" over "use". You may think, "who cares?" but read a paper where everything is said with complex words, passive voice, etc.--it gets dense. One of my favorite books is Write to the Point by Bill Stott. He advocates concise writing to communicate ideas quickly. I breezed through his book like it was a Neil Stephenson novel. This is a testimony to the difference clear writing makes.…
我很喜欢比尔·斯托特的《直奔主题》（Write to the Point）。非常赞同每个 hacker 都应该努力提升自己的写作能力。
I really like Write to the Point by Bill Stott. Agreed that every hacker should work to improve themselves as writers.
多写，读得更多（读书！），批判性地阅读自己写下的东西——比尔·斯托特，《直奔主题：让你的写作更自信》（Write to the Point - and feel better about your writing）
write a lot, read even more (books!), read critically what you wrote Bill Stott, "Write to the Point - and feel better about your writing"
你推荐的那本《直奔主题》（Write to the Point），我的那本现在还留着呢。
I still have my copy of Write to the Point, which you recommended.