先写好一个句子
First You Write a Sentence
Joe Moran · 初版 2018 年
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“句子是每一位写作者共同驻足的基石。只要肯付出时间的馈赠，任何人都能写出（并读懂）一个好句子，这也是我们大多数人所能触及的创造真正美好之物的最近途径。作者Joe Moran尽量减少使用专业术语，引用了从《圣经》、莎士比亚到George Orwell和Maggie Nelson等各方文献，并结合了关于如何最有效激发读者思维的科学研究，展示了我们如何能够写得清晰明了、引人入胜且充满生机。无论是寻找最恰当的字眼、构建一个句子，还是组织一个段落
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……沟通。我知道把文字写在纸上很重要，但在不丢失文意的前提下精简到不能再减之前，我似乎就没办法写下一句。大家可能会对 Joe Moran 的《First You Write a Sentence: The Elements of Reading, Writing … and Life》感兴趣。他从最底层剖析写作。我觉得读这本书真是种享受，里面的每一个句子都极棒。
…communicate. I see that it is important to get the text on the page, but I can't seem to move on until I can't reduce the writing before losing meaning. A book people might find interesting is Joe Moran’s "First You Write a Sentence: The Elements of Reading, Writing … and Life". He examines writing from the ground up. I found it a really wonderful book to read. Each sentence in it is great.
下面这些书或许能帮到你。1. Joe Moran 的《First You Write a Sentence》 - https://amzn.to/3m2Hq8N 2. Francine Prose 的《Reading Like a Writer》 - https://amzn.to/3dEXY3M 3. Stephen King 的《On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft》 - https://amzn.to/3mfLFhF 在……方面
The following books below might be of help to you. 1. First You Write a Sentence by Joe Moran - https://amzn.to/3m2Hq8N 2. Reading Like a Writer by Francine Prose - https://amzn.to/3dEXY3M 3. On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft by Stephen King - https://amzn.to/3mfLFhF In terms of…
说得在理。说到写好句子的艺术，我衷心推荐 Joe Moran 的《First You Write a Sentence》。
Good point. Speaking of the art of writing good sentences, I heartily recommend "First You Write a Sentence" by Joe Moran.
作为一本写作指南，我也非常推崇 Joe Moran 的《First You Write a Sentence》。
As a writing manual, I am also a big fan of "First You Write a Sentence" by Joe Moran.
我推荐的是 Joe Moran 的《First You Write a Sentence》。它感觉就像是一部近年的经典之作，我总是一遍遍重读其中的章节。
My recommendation is First You Write a Sentence. by Joe Moran. It feels like a recent classic and I re-read chapters all the time.
我过去也是这么看待散文写作的，但 Moran 的一本《First You Write a Sentence》改变了我在这方面的认知。正如 Moran 指出的，写作的“声韵”本身就能传达意义。只要不喧宾夺主，一点点修辞修饰反而能提升句子的清晰度……
I used to think this way about prose too, but a book called "First You Write a Sentence" by Moran changed my assumption on this one. As Moran points out, the "sound" of writing conveys meaning in itself. A little flourish, so long as it's not distracting, can improve the clarity of a sentence…